Never take it as an insult if someone tells you your art is weird. Take it as a compliment always, it means you're creative and someone just noticed you. I used to draw stuff just like this when I was much younger and always got the same response about it being weird or gross. This is an epic sketch that draws an emotional response from the viewer. Very nice work!
Your composition and overall forms are very good. Consider working on your lines to make them a little more solid and consistent. You'd be breaking no rules using a straight edge occasionally when working on the technical parts. I like your use of color, especially as a pop-out with the eyes. Very good work...keep it up!
I feel like with as large as her eyes are, there should be some embellishment on her face to continues the theme. My mind decided to imagine a scifi future where near-human children of science are subjugated to this sort of modification for some eldritch research gains. I love your work by the way.